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The Webcomics Weekly #114: Webcomic Sweep (11/24/2020 Edition)

By | November 24th, 2020
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Welcome back to The Webcomics Weekly!

I hope everyone is staying safe this week as it’s Thanksgiving here in the States. Maybe celebrate by reading some comics by Indigenous/Native/First Nations peoples instead of the pilgrims with a bird they wouldn’t have eaten this year. Anyway! Webcomics! We got the continuation of “Lavender Jack,” some “Kwi Comics,” a different look at a comic from last week “The First Night with the Duke” and Elias’ continued project of writing way too many words about the adaptation differences of “Tower of God” and Tower of God. Enjoy y’all!

“The First Night with the Duke”
Episode 1 – 5
Updates: Mondays
Art By MSG
Adapted By Teava
Reviewed by Jacob Cordas

Romance is in the air. It is overwhelming like a weighted blanket that has been in the dryer too long. It is soft and fuzzy. It asks too much and too little. It is love, the kind of love that can only be birthed out of waking up in a novel, having a one-night stand you can’t remember with the dangerously debonair hottie, and finally befriending the ingenue in a desperate attempt to undo whom you’ve done did.

You know, relatable.

MSG and Teava have worked together to create a webcomic that takes the parts of a CLAMP manga and mixes it with a healthy dose of Charlie Kaufman on ecstasy. It’s a friendly and fun-loving meta-romp that finds a fantastic new angle for an isekai. The colors and lines create an intimacy immediately that makes every panel feel like superb spooning. It’s a bathbomb that never runs out of bubbles, a hug from an ex that goes on far too long but you’re not complaining.

Characterization is more defined by genre than by character just yet. Time will tell if characters evolve out of their archetypal roles but currently they are more function than flesh. However, this far in, the function is enough. It’s easy and clear. Five parts in formality is fine.

All around and when all is said and done and when all’s well that ends well, The First Night With The Duke is the kind of single-overnight intercourse that I wouldn’t mind integrating into my rotation.

Kwi Comics
‘war?’ – ‘best goos’
Updates: Weekly-ish
By Deathbyfrogs
Reviewed by Elias Rosner

After a long week, I was looking for something simple to read for this column. No 100-page, narrative heavy comics that will last for years and years but instead something with short page counts per update, relatively new, and a single comic per joke/story. Scrolling through Canvas on Webtoon, I found “Kwi Comics.”

“Kwi Comics” is about as simple as you can get. One panel. Some figures. A few words as a caption. It reads like a personal expression, thrown together because of a desperate need to put onto a Canvas that which could not be contained any longer. It is intimate and close, the expressions of Kwi, Goos, and others. One can see themselves in these animals and their worries. In the vein of Baman, Piderman, the characters are purposefully rendered with thick outlines and rough details, the coloring used only to add a background or complete the look of a character, their sentences choppy and short.

There is a deep ennui to Kwi and friends’ entries, punctuated by small bouts of positivity. ‘feets’ exudes the energy of a day gone right, of finding oneself on the other side of a particularly bad day/week/year and even though it may be fleeting, as evidenced by Kwi’s lamentation that they miss their friends in ‘social shortcomings,’ that joy remains powerful to all who read it. It is a mark of time and of a moment and sometimes it is powerful to share in those moments, especially when they resonate as powerfully as these did for me. Sometimes the simplest comics can be the most profound.

Lavender Jack
Episodes 7-9
Schedule: Tuesdays – currently on seasonal hiatus
By Dan Schkade
Reviewed by Michael Mazzacane

After several strips worth of excitement, Dan Schkade slows things down in this batch of episodes. This trio of strips isn’t devoid of action, episode 8 is practically a single action set piece, but “Lavender Jack” is at the point in the series where Schkade can start to slowly tear away the layers of his characters. While this tends to be done through the dialog, Schkade shows good character acting and the larger canvas of the comic to make plainly interesting images.

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Episode 7 is split between two conversations. On one hand we have Ducky walking with Mister Kellogg aka Fred and gaining intel from him. At the other end of the strip Detective Ferrier is trying to hunt down information on the Inclement Investment Company. Ducky and Fred’s conversation is a classic walk and talk that allows Schkade to work out more of Gallery’s city geography creating an engaging environment for some blunt exposition readers likely already knew. This less than new information however bordered by a series of delightful profiles of various subjects that make for good imagery. This trio of panels are essentially vertical spreads and the kind of back-to-back spectacular imagery that you couldn’t easily fit on a normal comic page. Ferrier’s continued investigation reveals more from how those around her react, in particular Honoria Crabb and their desire not to know her master’s secrets – justified by the fine business they’re all doing for Gallery and it’s façade of social-economic good.

Both of these visual techniques come together in the ninth episode as Sir Mimley and Ducky just sit around and have a nice chat over some tea. Making conversations visually interesting is hard, making one when both cast members are sitting even more so. Schkade makes it visually appealing though subtle shifts in how Ducky is drawn. This conversation sequence is more about them and their anxieties than Mimley who seems to be having a right good time. It’s subtle but well-done work in the ninth episode.

In between both of these talky episodes is a good old fight strip as the mysterious Lord Hawthorne is summoned back home after winning yet another equivalent of the Taipei Death Match. Schkade makes a smart decision of simply resorting to putting the fighting bodies in sequence with each other against the vastness of gutter space, dropping everything but their fight out. It helps to emphasize the pov the spectator but also creates an interesting temporal paradox in the comics medium where it goes by very fast and very slowly all at once. This strip had one purpose to put Lord Hawthorne over as a threat to Mimley and Jack and it did it spectacularly. Hawthorne’s portrayal as this civilized savage falls into some colonialist discourses that are antithetical to today, but fit the time period the strip evokes and is critiquing. It is only one strip so maybe Hawthorne will be shown to be more or less in the strips to come.

Tower of God
Tower of God: Season 1 Eps. 38-43; Episode 8 – “Khun’s Strategy”
Updates: Mondays (Currently on Hiatus in English)
By SIU
Reviewed by Elias Rosner

What do you desire? Money and wealth? Honor and pride? Authority and power? Revenge? Or something that transcends them all? Whatever you desire—it can be yours if you climb the tower.

Each time I return to this column, I say that the comic “Tower of God” has a leg up on the show Tower of God because it has the space to add in details about the world and its mechanics that would only serve to slow the pace of the show down, something it really doesn’t need seeing as how the pace has already slowed from the earlier “two tests per episode” to “two episodes per test.”

I must apologize for misspeaking. “Tower of God” also suffers from the extra exposition.

Dear (tower of) god, were these chapters a slog to get through. While I felt that the episode did spend a lot of its run time taking its sweet ass time getting to the end, it was kept engaging by the twists and turns and the palpable sense of tension generated by the quality of the episode direction. That and Kevin Penkins’ amazing score, which emphasizes the dramatic over the comedic, keeping even light moments from feeling tonally dissonant. Not so with the comic.

The minutiae of how many Baangs Quant has left to use and how much he’s been allotted by the administrator has no analog for the audience to grasp, no useful scale, so it amounts to nonsense babble, like how Power Levels in Dragon Ball Z went from a useful tool for escalation to absolutely meaningless after Freeza’s eleventeenth transformation. This isn’t a video game where I have a Shinsu bar that’s kept consistent by math, it’s a comic that works at the whims of the creator and what does and does not use Shinsu and at what level is up to SIU and, thus, meaningless to us, the readers. What matters is what the characters do and how they do it, and the effect that has on the environment, the other characters, and the narrative. The rest is filler.

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This doesn’t mean I don’t love an arbitrary limit on power but it’s gotta be quantifiable in terms the audience can understand and one that raises the tension of the scene. Batman being down to his final three batarangs, Soma being all out of a key ingredient, or Deku breaking his arm each time he uses an attack, those are all stakes and limits we can grasp. Tower of God sidesteps this issue by just saying Quant’s Shinsu is limited for this test. Is that amount? Is it power? Doesn’t really matter — though Khun does clarify later on that it’s quantity, taunting Quant about being careful so he doesn’t run out — because it’s implied that the reduction in power is to prevent him from killing the test takers (LOL) and from absolutely demolishing the test takers. He’s still heads and shoulders above them all and so him having used up one Baang out of one and a half or whatever Baangs is a needless complication that slows the narrative down.

The purpose of this test is to demonstrate that, despite his lackadaisical attitude, Quant is intelligent and skilled, knowing the best way to take out multiple enemies at once, utilizing his speed, and hiding in the dark. It’s also to show that Khun is a master strategist that is able to out think Quant AND plan to set Bam up to succeed. There’s more lead-up in “Lunch and Tag” in order to drive home that Bam being on the other team matters to Khun, and is thus factored into his plan.

I’ll stop him with my DUEL DISK SYSTEM

The comic wants us to see the battle between Team A & Team B as a central conflict while the show is content to highlight the issue that this test raises without centering it. This is done mostly through a reduction in the times we cut back to Team B during Team A’s test — when we do, they’re significantly less overjoyed at Team A’s failures and Bam is more reserved and nervous on behalf of Khun — and by drastically cutting the number of Test Administrators discussing the performance of Team A.

It’s just Hansung Yu & Lero Ro in Tower of God and this not only has the effect of cutting down the number of extraneous characters and streamlining the scenes, but focusing the commentary to the important bits, establishing the intra-Administrator conflict and setting Hansung Yu up as a more sinister and knowledgeable foe.

“Tower of God” is content to use the “wise leader” trope to sell jokes and act as a foil to Lero Ro’s excitement and snap judgements. Again, this is down to a difference in character consistency I’ve touched on before. That said, the comic has the added benefit of giving Hansung Yu another great speech that is sadly missing from the show. One point “Tower of God!”

Another point goes to the small clarifications it makes. The “he’s trying not to kill them” is far clearer in the comic considering, uh, the show is very bad about establishing when someone is taken out and when someone is taken out. The same is with the limits on Khun’s bag and why he didn’t just duplicate the badge (though they may have snuck that bit into the exposition of the test in “Lunch and Tag”) and what in the everloving fuck was the Spear Bearer Revolutionaries’ plan, though that one doesn’t matter cause, well, Pericule kinda sucks and it’s easy to think his plan was just stab Quant with spears just like the last team failed to do.

The last couple changes are pretty significant. Aside from changing the time Quant waits from 32 minutes and 13 seconds to 111 seconds, thereby upping the urgency, the timeline of Khun’s plan and how it plays out are wildly different. Honestly, they don’t really matter but the twists in the show of who outplays who (or who we think outplays who) land far more effectively. Leron 3 isn’t taken out right at the start and Anaak isn’t standing on top of Khun’s lighthouse, which was a GENIUS change since it set-up the ability for people to stand on lighthouses as well as turning the lights off to hide them, established how one could take out a lighthouse by rendering the user unconscious, and foreshadows Anaak standing on it later as well and using her whip to save Khun.

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Lookit Quant’s shit eating grin. Can’t wait to see it get wiped off his smug fucking face.

Since the show did away with the ridiculous technobabble of suspendium and whatnot, the explanation for how he has two lighthouses is simplified (magic bag of copying,) and Quant’s threat/discovery can be simplified as well, making him seem more impulsive and reckless (unconscious Khun=bye bye Anaak.) We’ve also seen Shinsu users survive high falls, hence his willingness to jump, and since it’s established he’s near his limit, we can surmise that Quant only has enough to survive the fall and not make it back up without having to sit through an itemized list of why he’s 3 Muu short.

Additionally, the “reveal” scene of how Quant got back up to the bridge plays out differently due to the mediums. Laure is recognizable by his voice in Tower of God and so doesn’t need to physically appear until Khun’s involvement in that little charade is revealed whereas in “Tower of God” we need to see him to know who is helping Quant; a dialog balloon is not going to reveal who is talking as easily. It’s not a mystery that’s important to keep mysterious since it’s revealed less than two minutes/a chapter later but both accomplish the intended effect of building tension and questions. If the comic chose to not to show Laure, the who could it be would overshadow the why would they do this. If the show chose to show him, it would eat up time that’s unnecessary and reduce the immediacy of the question of why Laure is helping.

The actual big change is in Hoh’s reaction to Serena’s backstory reveal, something that felt rushed and out of nowhere in both places but I digress. “Tower of God” has him react much more coolly, like he’s still keeping up with the charade and that he’s not planning anything with Rachel, a fact we know about in “Tower of God” that is being kept from us in Tower of God. It makes the end of that scene feel less intense and worrying and more like Serena & Hoh have shared a moment, even if that moment is bittersweet. In Tower of God, Hoh berates her for forgetting they’re all competitors.

The underlying realization is the same — that to climb the tower, they have and may continue to have to use others as stepping stones — but in the show, Hoh disavows Serena of any notion of comradery whereas in the comic, the two are united in their understanding that the tower is cruel and the things they may have to do to each other as cruel. They are united only insofar as it is convenient and they should not begrudge each other when that ends. In the show, Serena’s more maudlin regrets and Hoh’s stern rebuke is 1) more in-line with Hoh and Serena’s characterization (a running theme I will probably never stop mentioning) and 2) a more effective moment of conflict and mystery.

What did the letter say? Does his attitude have anything to do with it? These questions are moot in the comic as we know what was in the letter and so there’s no need to draw out a confrontation. Plus, by putting it in the middle of a chapter rather than at the end of an episode (though not the very very end,) it serves as a respite rather than needing to serve as a hook.

As always there are more small changes but I have to call it somewhere. Next time, “The One-Horned Ogre” and, I presume, some backstory for our third princess of Jahad, Endorsi.


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